My group and I have decided to change our story line, as we felt that our previous sotry line wasn't believable and wasn't looking like a horror film. This encouraged us to think about changing the way in which the stories portrayed.
We have decided to exclude Ben (Ambrose) and Bel as too many people in the house didn't make the horror genre realistic. We have decided to keep the killer (George) as he fits the build of a stereotypical killer, Emma will also still keep the main leeding role of the vulnrable teenage girl. We hope this will improve our footage and provide us with a believable story.
The new story line consists of; Emma asleep in the bedroom but then she hears noises and becomes weary and frightned. Emma will walk into the bathroom and splash her face with water, she will look up and see there is a death threat on the bathroom mirror (Emma SCREAMS). The camera circles the whole room to show that there is no killer to be seen. The killer will then appear in the bathroom behind Emma. Emma will then run back into the bedroom, the killer then chases after Emma holding a knife to her. Emma will scream and wake up, realising that it was a dream.
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